Rust · Page checks
| Severity | High | Medium | Low |
|---|---|---|---|
| Found | 0 | 2 | 2 |
| Fixed | 0 | 1 | 1 |
0 high, 2 medium, 2 low issues found. 1 medium and 1 low fixed.
M1 — FIXED: Timeline table lifted out of the 'Mozilla layoffs and the Rust Foundation (2020–present)' subsection into its own ### Timeline heading, so it reads clearly as a full-history summary rather than a sub-period one.
M2 — NOT FIXED (deferred): Section order Adoption → Governance → Memory safety policy. Reordering to Adoption → Memory safety policy → Governance was identified but not applied; deferred to editor decision.
L1 — NOT FIXED (pending editor choice): 'Relation to memory safety policy' heading is wordy. Candidates: 'Memory safety and policy' or 'Memory safety policy context'. Awaiting editor selection.
L2 — FIXED: Added bridging sentence 'A separate controversy arose around intellectual property in 2023.' at the start of the trademark paragraph in 'Governance disputes', clearly separating the two unrelated incidents.
Full rationale:
M1 detail: The timeline table ends the "Mozilla layoffs and the Rust Foundation (2020–present)" subsection. Visually it reads as a summary of only that sub-period. Moving it outside all subsections (before the next H2) signals clearly that it covers 2006–2024.
M2 detail: Encyclopedic convention places what a subject does in the world before how it is internally governed. Both Adoption and Memory safety policy describe Rust's real-world reach and policy significance. Governance describes the project's own organisational structure. Reordering puts like-content together and matches reader expectations: understand the language → understand its external impact → understand how it is run.
L1 detail: "Relation to X" is a relational phrase uncommon in heading positions in this style; noun-phrase headings are preferred per meta/style.
L2 detail: The two incidents in "Governance disputes" are structurally different (accountability crisis vs. IP/open-source norms dispute). A one-sentence transition (e.g., 'A separate controversy arose over intellectual property…') would orient readers without adding a new heading.
No edits applied pending human editor approval (Step 5).